I have got a few ideas of ways in which I can use non-diegetic sound to good effect. There will be a continual drone which is played throughout the piece, and will increase in dynamics during the part when Sean Saunders says "I can't" since this is an important section of the film opening. I will also include footsteps during the black transition between the ident and the first shot of the film. I believe this will have the viewers engaged from the beginning. The footsteps will also get gradually louder and the climax will be during the first cut to the scene.
Love the lighting, angles and feel of this.
ReplyDeleteTo improve, i'd suggest making some cuts between shots smoother. Pluse audio,obviously.
I liked this and am looking forward to the version with sound.
ReplyDeleteThe lighting words very well :D
I would spend more time working on the titles though
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i Really liked the fade when it began but i think some of the cuts need to be a little smoother. The shadow on the looked so good and when the audio has been put in im sure it will look even better :)
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