Here is the second draft of my 2 minute opening film. In this draft I have added a non-diegetic sound track as well as some footsteps at the end of the piece. The point behind these changes is to just get a greater feeling towards what my final productrion piece will end up like after all of the non-diegetic sound has been added.
I also modified some of the video footage for added effect. This includes video transactions between shots which creates a more uneven, dreamy atnosphere to reflect the situation of the main character.
I love your use of lighting, especially the shadows, they really set the mood of the piece. Your use of non-diagetic sound is good for the piece as it highlights the suspension of the scene. Once the dialogue is added this will be great!
I love your use of lighting, especially the shadows, they really set the mood of the piece. Your use of non-diagetic sound is good for the piece as it highlights the suspension of the scene. Once the dialogue is added this will be great!
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